4 years ago, I went with my family to a very beautiful hotel in Ilat(Eilat). Ilat is not a big city but it has a lot of hotels in there. The hotel was very big and beautiful, it really made an impression on me and and until now, i was talking(phr. and gr.) about the hotel from (the) outside. The hotel is huge and amazing from (the) inside, (too).
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When we arrived at the hotel I couldn't believe that something like hotel(a hotel) could be such a beautiful place. My father asked me to look for cool things inside the hotel, look for the pool, and for more beautiful things or things to do. So I walked for an hour inside the hotel, it was very impressing(impressive) and I really enjoyed it. I saw very beautiful flowers, and trees. The pool was very big. And there were a lot of women and men in the bar, laughing and talking. After a while we entered the room and the room was very big, it had 4 beds and bathroom, a veranda' a table to eat on .and the room really impressed us.
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The hotel is really cool, I really recommend to visit this hotel, this is the best place I ever saw(have ever seen) and (it's)worth the time, money and fuel that you spend until you get there. Also, the entertainment team is very funny and I really recommend to watch them every evening; they give prizes and a lot of cool stuff. So as I said, go there and enjoy as I enjoyed, you won't regret it.
Mor, this is better. I can see that corrected some of your mistakes, but you have left quite a few mistakes uncorrected. Please correct the sentences and words I have marked.
Daphna.
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