29.01.09
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Dear Ronit ,
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New Friend(what is this? the title? If so, this not the place for it)

I heared about your problem with Jill. This is a very difficult problem.
There is a problem with shy people because they don't make friends so easliy and it is very kind that you want to be his friend. However you have another problem with your snobbish friends. If you become friends with Jill, you risk losing your other friends.

The solution to this problem is up to you: First of all, you should talk to Jill and try to understand what does he want(gr. - what he wants). Then, if you see that he is very friendly, you can slowly, slowly (ww. gradually) join(ww.) him to the group, and then your snobbish friends will be his friend too. But first of all, you have to go and talk to him and find common activities(ww. - interests).

If Jill doesn't seem to be accepted by your snobbish friends, then this is a very big problem and then you should try to change his behavior, if you still want to be his friend. If you succeed, you will be able to join(ww.) him to your group easliy, but if he doesn't want to change his behavior, then you can be his friend and say to your snobbish friends that you would like to stay their friend even if you have another new friend.

Then, as I said, Jill will be your friend and your snobbish friends too and then everyone will be happy. You have a new friend that has no social problems and you just created a new world to(ww. - for) a new student

From
Mor Bar

This is much-much better. It's clear and interesting. Well done. (85)

Daphna.

War in Gaza

In the last few weeks, Israel got in to Gaza and started a war.
The Hamas in Gaza launches missles at the south of Israel for a lot of time. This is the time to respond to the attacks.
I think that this action is very necessary and as Bibi Netanyahu said, we have no other choice.
In fact, Israel is doing all it can to save the innocent citizens. Israel's army calls the citizens which live in a building and says them to leave before the building will be attacked by the army, but there is a problem, those citizens don't leave, they climb on the roof and wait for the attacks.
Moreover, Gaza has a TV show that shows a bunny, A lot of kids love this bunny and it is very famous. A few days ago, the Hamas broadcast the last chapter of this series and showed to the kids in Gaza that the bunny was injured by Israel's army and they showed the bunny dying
and then after it said that the zionist hit him, he died. This is the way that they teach the kids when they are young to hate Israel.
I think that all we need to do is to keep fight with out mercy and only when all of the soliders of the Hamas will surrender, only then, we should make peace and stop the war.
It might cost soliders thier life, but every war has a price and we have to pay it in order to save the citizens in the south of Israel.