Peer pressure happens when you don't really know what to do. Your brain tells you to do the right thing but your friends tell you to do the wrong thing. Sometimes, the student doesn't know what to do and listens to his friends (and) so(he) lies to other people, and steals money from his parents. Peer pressure is a big step towards the wrong way.
On the one hand, people tend to listen to their friends because they want to fit in or worry about other kids that may make fun of them. so, they surrender to peer pressure. But some of the time, people really become liked in the community. Sometimes this peer pressure helps you fit in.
On the other hand, people act as other people tell them to act and they get into very terrible places as jail or they get into embarrassing situations when they get into craim(ww.) situations as a result of peer Pressure.
To sum up, peer pressure can be ignored by kids only if they think about their future and think before doing terrible things or you can listen to your friends and try to fit in but don't surrender to peer pressure, because it is not a good thing and can only bring troubles.- This is a great conclusion, but you have to divide this very long sentence into, at least, two shorter ones.
Very good work! I'm proud of you.
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Daphna.
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