Home Work

The teachers in schools think that the best thing(ww.) to teach students in class is the home work.
They usually say that this is the best way to gain information and rememebr (sp.) it.
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In my opnion Ben (Who is Ben? How is he related? You have to explain in a few words) is totally right! I agree that H.W is unecessary to learn the material. All the teacher have to do is to learn(ww. - teach) us the material in the class and then when they really want us to do something and not get bored at home they can give us some projects. But, as I said, no H.W. Even if (you) prepared(gr. - prepare) the H.W everytime, you always forget what have you done in the H.W (the word order here is wrong).

But(ww. - However,) the H.W is necessary only in math. When you do H.W in math you always do the same thing(what thing? The exerecises?) and then you get used to it and you can learn it faster. The(מיותר) math become(gr. - becomes) a very(מיותר) fun material and everytime you prepare H.W you enjoy it.

To sum up, the(מיותר) H.W is not necessary to students. All they have to do is to practise on(מיותר) the new material and do (the) tests, nothing more.

You have quite a few grammar mistakes and some of your sentences need rephrasing. Other than that, you are not saying much in this essay. I need more depth in your work. Your last paragraph needs reorganizing. (70)
Daphna