Dirty Places

132 Fleetwood Street

Ashvile

September 12, 2009

The Editor

Around Town

P.O Box 52

Ashvile

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Dear Editor,

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Concerning the article "Dirty Places" I would like to express my point of view. In my opinion, people in Israel really take care of the environment. To begin with(מיותר), in the article you wrote that Israelis don't take care of the environment and all they do is throw their garbage anywhere they want.

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In my opinion, you're wrong. Today there are a lot of people in Israel that volunteer for free. Those people join cleaning groups and together they clean dirty places and rivers. As for the people who throw their garbage anywhere they want, I think that you can't say that about everyone, the awareness about this subject is very high today. A lot of people know that plastics pollute the environment. So, today most of the people throw their garbage into the nearest garbage can and not on the floor.

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To sum up, I think that you are wrong, Israelis take care of the environment. moreover, some of them also volunteer and clean dirty places for free.

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Yours Truly,

Mor Bar

It's better, but it's still too short.

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