Holon
July 2, 2009
Mrs. Gilat Simon
Kugel High School
1 Mota-Gur street
Holon
Dear Madam,
Once a year, students from Israel journey(ww.) to Poland. There, in Poland, the Israeli students see the remains of what exactly happened during the Holocaust. They can see there the conditions that the Jews had in the Ghetto. I am writing because this journey is very important for us, the Jewish students, but not all of us can afford it and some of us really want to go there but the cost of the trip is too high for us.
First of all, as I said in the first paragraph, the costs of the journey are too high. Today, there are a lot of problems with the economy in Israel. I think that if there is an opportunity for students to go on this journey, then all of the students should go, in keeping with the idea that all students deserve the same rights, and schools shouldn't let economic troubles affect a student's participation in school activites.
Moreover, I personally know some students that really want to go on this journey, but they can't afford it and they can't do anything about it. I think that you, as a principal, should gather signatures from all of the students and the signatures will be used for a vote of lowering the price(phr.) of the journey or, you could collect money from donors in order to lower the price.
To sum up, there are a lot of students that really want to go on this journey but they can't afford the costs. The cost of this journey is very high and someone has to help and lower the price, and(Start a new sentence) if the government can't do it then we should for(מיותר) ask (for) help from people that(ww. who) would like to donate some of their money to us, the students who can't afford the journey.
Sincerely yours,
Mor Bar
Good work.
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Daphna
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