2 weeks ago my class went on a trip to the "Gadna". I really liked the time we spent there. I also learned a lot of things about myself; such as appreciating my mother's food, or showering alone with out any disturbs(ww.). But after all, I really liked this trip, if I had the opportunity to go there again, I would do that.

In the "Gadna", we had to do everything that our commanders ordered us. It was kind of strange because, in my home, I don't really listen to what my parents say. We also had to clean the toilet, the kitchen, and our tent, which I have never done before; my mom always does that. The commanders divided us (in)to 9 teams of 12 students. So, in order to finish our missions fast, we had to work together.

Moreover, we went into the field. The field had very dry sand(How is this fact related to anything?). The weather there was very strange; it was very hot between the hours (of) 10 AM to 6 PM and for the rest of the day it was too cold and we had to wear all of the clothes we got. We also had to stand up with the times(phr.), for example, if the commander gave us 10 minutes for resting(phr.), we abused(ww.) it as much as we can(gr.) and then we had to find the other team mate in order to have more resting time and not be punished(nor clear), so we also learned to help each other.

To sum up, I have(מיותר) really enjoyed (it) there. I liked the point(ww.) that the commanders were trying to give(ww.) us, which is the team work and I liked the whole point(ww.) of being in the gadna, which is like the army itself. But I didn't like the weather there, it was to unexpected and made everyone sick.I think that it was the best trip we have ever had and i really recommend to the people who doubt about going(phr.) there or not, to go there, you will enjoy it for sure.

Not bad at all. Where is your 11th writing assignment????

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Daphna

Bareket 24
Holon
24/2/2010


Travel Agency online
Hopien ST. 36(wo. - 35 Hopien st.)

U.S.A

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter because I bought tickets for a trip in Turkey. But than ,when I arrived to the hotel , I realized that it was a mistake to go on this trip. I didn't enjoy the hotel, or the trip. I am writing this letter because I wish to complain about the wrogn details and I also want a refund.

The site that sold the tickets stated that therewould be 3 meals a day in the hotel. The site alsostated that there would be 5 beds in the room, the room would be clean and there would be an air-conditioner. The site gave information about the tour as well. It said that we would go to the famous waterfall-niagara fall, and then we would climb mountains and see a beautiful view from there.

When I got to the hotel, I found out that there were only 2 meals a day, and the meals were disgusting. When I saw the room that the website promised us, I got(ww. - was) shocked because of the dirty walls(and floor) in the room, the floor was very dirty too(מיותר). I had though about a room that would worth the money(phr.) after I read the details about this room. We didn't go to the "Niagara" falls, either, because the guide was sick.

To sum up, I want to ask you for a refund. The website did not give us the right information about the room. It was very dirty and we had to clean it by ourselves. Moreover, we didn't go to the "Niagara" falls as promised because of the instructor(ww.).

I look forward to your answer.

Sincerely yours,

Shlomi Califa.

Much better. Good work.

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Daphna