Holon
Bareket 10 (10 Bareket st.)
08/04/2010


Station manager
(Add the name of the station)
Holon
Bareket 45 (45 bareket st.
Holon)

Dear Sir/Madam.

I am writing this letter because I would like suggest an issue for the radio situation(ww.) to deal with. Moreover(מיותר), being a teenager, I know what would be interesting for other teens. I think that in order to get their attention the program should focus on problems connected to the IDF The Israel's army

Many teenagers today don't want to join the army. Some of these teenagers think that joining the army is a bad, unnecessary waste of their time. Some teenagers lie when they need to be tested for a position in the army. Furthermore, some teenagers who can really help the army with their superior abilites think that they can spend their time in other places that can better advance them in the future.

In addition, the program should offer interested students(ww.-not clear what you mean) 2 kinds of tools: 1. A place to ask questions about issues raised in the program. 2. Get(ww. - gain) experience by being sent to the army for (a) short time in order to show to those students what they might like in the army and what they might not like. This will get them motivated and give them a specific direction towards which(what?) to apply themselves.

To sum up, as a new series on the radio station, it should deal with the problems of students with the army(phr.). If the series succeeds, the government will be grateful and more people will join the army. I hope that you take my suggestions into consideration.

,Sincerely yours

Raz Bar

Good work.

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Daphna