24 Bareket St.
Holon
24/4/2010

Harvard University
P.O BOX 18770
Philadelphia. PA
USA

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter because I would like to apply for admission to your university.I understand you have an excellent economics course. I also heard that Harvard University is the best university for education pertaining to economics and I think that I am suitable to join the course at Harvard university because of my excellent grades in all (the) subjects I have previously learned.

As I said, my grades are very good and I want to apply for admission to your university because I heard that Harvard University's students almost always pass the final test and after passing the final test they can get a job very easily and the salary is much better if you learned(ww.+gr.) in(ww. - at) Harvard University. Moreover, while I was in school, I had never caused any problems or anything of the sort nor had I ever acted against the rules of the school, (New sentence) therefore, I really want to learn, and I am not going to cause any trouble in the University.- too long.

The reason that I want to join the economics course is because when I was young I saw a lot of movies about successful people who manage to buy things and sell them for higher prices, or become a manager of successful people, for example actors or football players etc.. In addition, my father is a salesman and from a young age I have seen what he usually does and I really like it. Morover, I really like math, so numbers is(gr.) not a problem for me.

To sum up, I think that I am suitable to join the economics course at Harvard University because of my grades and my passion for success in my life as a salesman or actors' manager.

I look forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Shubi Star.

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Daphna