24 Bareket St.
Holon
24/4/2010

Harvard University
P.O BOX 18770
Philadelphia. PA
USA

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter because I would like to apply for admission to your university.I understand you have an excellent economics course. I also heard that Harvard University is the best university for education pertaining to economics and I think that I am suitable to join the course at Harvard university because of my excellent grades in all (the) subjects I have previously learned.

As I said, my grades are very good and I want to apply for admission to your university because I heard that Harvard University's students almost always pass the final test and after passing the final test they can get a job very easily and the salary is much better if you learned(ww.+gr.) in(ww. - at) Harvard University. Moreover, while I was in school, I had never caused any problems or anything of the sort nor had I ever acted against the rules of the school, (New sentence) therefore, I really want to learn, and I am not going to cause any trouble in the University.- too long.

The reason that I want to join the economics course is because when I was young I saw a lot of movies about successful people who manage to buy things and sell them for higher prices, or become a manager of successful people, for example actors or football players etc.. In addition, my father is a salesman and from a young age I have seen what he usually does and I really like it. Morover, I really like math, so numbers is(gr.) not a problem for me.

To sum up, I think that I am suitable to join the economics course at Harvard University because of my grades and my passion for success in my life as a salesman or actors' manager.

I look forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Shubi Star.

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Daphna

24 Bareket St.
Holon
24/4/2010



"See The World" Travel Agency
1764 West 125th Street
New York




Dear Sir / Madam,


My name is Shoval. I am writing this letter because I want to ask a few questions about the organized tour to the United States which I hope to take part in. I am 17 years old and the main reasons why I want to visit the United State are food and sightseeing. The problem is that my English is not very good and I expect to have a guide who knows both English and Hebrew because I don't have any experience traveling.


I heard about the tour from my friend. He told me that people in the tour are given time to rest in restaurants and places with captivating views of nature from a very high altitude, for example from the Empire State Building or Mount Rushmore and some other famous places. I would also like to ask what the policy is concerning non kosher food and visiting Chinese restaurants.




First of all, I would like to ask some questions. I would like to know how much an organized tour which includes all the states in the United States costs I would also like to know what meals will be served in the hotels we'll stay in Will we eat there or only sleep there? What about entertainment in the hotels? Furthermore, I would like to ask how many people will attend the tour and what will their average age.


To sum up, I can't wait to join the tour and I would like to hear from your company as soon as possible.


Sincerely yours,
Shoval Bar

Good work
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Daphna

Holon
Bareket 10 (10 Bareket st.)
08/04/2010


Station manager
(Add the name of the station)
Holon
Bareket 45 (45 bareket st.
Holon)

Dear Sir/Madam.

I am writing this letter because I would like suggest an issue for the radio situation(ww.) to deal with. Moreover(מיותר), being a teenager, I know what would be interesting for other teens. I think that in order to get their attention the program should focus on problems connected to the IDF The Israel's army

Many teenagers today don't want to join the army. Some of these teenagers think that joining the army is a bad, unnecessary waste of their time. Some teenagers lie when they need to be tested for a position in the army. Furthermore, some teenagers who can really help the army with their superior abilites think that they can spend their time in other places that can better advance them in the future.

In addition, the program should offer interested students(ww.-not clear what you mean) 2 kinds of tools: 1. A place to ask questions about issues raised in the program. 2. Get(ww. - gain) experience by being sent to the army for (a) short time in order to show to those students what they might like in the army and what they might not like. This will get them motivated and give them a specific direction towards which(what?) to apply themselves.

To sum up, as a new series on the radio station, it should deal with the problems of students with the army(phr.). If the series succeeds, the government will be grateful and more people will join the army. I hope that you take my suggestions into consideration.

,Sincerely yours

Raz Bar

Good work.

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Daphna